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MLP anthro sketch - Rarity and Twilight by NauticalSparrow MLP anthro sketch - Rarity and Twilight by NauticalSparrow
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I sketched this months ago and have been coming back to it again and again to fix things. It all looks sort of good to me but I want to know if it looks good to you guys.

Image Insperation
This idea was inspired by episode 3 "The Ticket Master" when Rarity gives Twilight Sparkle "a make over!". Well Rarity goes a little over board, giving Twilight Sparkle an embarrassed shock! "R-rarity!?" "It's simply fabulous!"

Please critique this!
I up-loaded this to get constructive criticism from you guys on what looks good and what might be changed. If I have to redraw the whole thing I will, but I just want to know what could/would make this better. Things to look at:

- anatomy : the only thing that I use a reference for was twilight sparkles stomatch

- poses : do they look good? natural? should they be more dramatic?

- expressions

I KNOW THAT SOME PEOPLE DO NOT LIKE PEOPLE DRAWING THEIR FAVORITE PONIES ECCHI/SEXY, that is ok, but please do not troll, flame or bash me or anyone else that may enjoy it. Thank you.


art/sketch *NauticalSparrow
Rarity and Twilight Sparkle Hasbro
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Operia Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
After looking at the "before/after" version of the image, I've deduced that this is a sketch and not your finished product. Because of this, I'll try not to be too pedantic about image quality, and touch on it quickly now.

The line-art is scratchy and in places uneven, which I believe was remedied (for the most part) in the final version. That's all I really have to say on the image quality.

The anatomy of the two females is a little off in places. One thing that jumps out at me is the arms of the female on the left hand side of the image. Her left arm seems to be detached from her shoulder. This could be remedied in two ways; either by making the arm skinnier at the base where it becomes hidden behind the other female's arm, or draw the shoulder bending down slightly more; at the moment it seems to be pointing out a bit too much, which would suggest the arm is extending away from the body.

Another thing to point out is the right arm of the right hand female. The elbow looks odd; it should be centred more, using the palm's position as reference. Also, the upper part of her arm seems a little too bulky, although this may also be fixed by moving the location of the elbow.

Hopefully you found my advice useful, and continue to improve your style
NauticalSparrow Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for taking the time to look and give me some advice. This was just a rough sketch, it wasn't supposed to be completely clean, I wanted to know what I should fix before I did the line art because it would be a big hassel to have to redo the line art each time. So I would like if everyone would ignore the "quality" of the image when critiquing.

So left females (Rarity) left arm needs some fixing and the right female (twilight) right arms elbow needs fixing, got it!
Operia Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, I'm glad you found my advice somewhat useful :)
ronmart12 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
can I color this?
NauticalSparrow Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
No, you cannot.
ronmart12 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
NauticalSparrow Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yea sorry :( but thank you for asking.
ronmart12 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
it's alright
ColonelYeo Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That is looking fantastic so far!

I love Rarity and Twilight's faces. Plus the detail work on that outfit...
Mylietus1991 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Professional Writer
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